Correction Help

1. Capitalize the first letter of every sentence.
2. Capitalize names of people and cities.
3. Captitalize the pronoun I.
4. In English, we say I was born not I am born.
5. Use in for cities, provinces and countries.
6. In English, we say, I am + age + years old.
7. To indicate that an activity started in the past and continues into the present, use I have been VERB + ing in".
8. Capitalize program names: Social Sciences (humans sciences), Nursing, etc.
9. Use for for periods of time. Use since for a point in time.
10. In English, don't repeat the subject for emphasis: Me, I like to dance.
11. In English, party is a noun and a verb. I party, you party, etc. We don't "do party."
12. Remember that it is he /she/it VERB + s in the Simple Present.